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October 20, 2010
COOL JOB
Cool job for me is car tester. I know someone who doing this career. His name is Nurheidi. He worked since 1988. He work at 'Isuzu Company'. Nurhaeidi is car tester in that company. he have mission for checking new cars which fresh from the factory. He must be checking the brake, gas, and the engine of cars carefully. to become a car tester, Nurhaedi should be able to drive. And he must be aware about motor and engine. If Nurhaedi do his job, he testing all the car in the track that had been prepared by the company. in the presence of test drive by Nurhaedi, all the car must be savety and possible to drived by all costumer.
Good topic sentence. Do you have a picture of Nurheidi? Would be nice to include it in this post.
BalasHapusCheck out the formula :
He must + Verb
And he must be aware about motor and engine ==> he must be knowledgable in motor and engine.
Also pay attention to the capitalization.