Cemisya Umiakulsum Asiah
English 1
Jakarta's Problem
There are a lot of Jakarta's problem. First of all, the problem is flood. The cause of the flood is because there are not enough drainage area. Second, the problem that Jakarta must deal with is traffic jam. Wherever you go, you will always stuck in the traffic jam. The cause is number of vehicles are increasing. The last but not least is riot. Recently there was a riot in some area of Jakarta and it caused many people felt scared living in Jakarta. In short, Jakarta has a lot of problems.
I totally agree, those problems in Jakarta are ones that the government needs to solve immediately. I would be interested to know what you think should be done.
BalasHapusWriting feedback : When writing a concluding sentence, it is recommended to word it differently than the topic sentence. Can you guys think of other way to summarize the paragraph?
I agree with both of you, do you guys have the solution for jakarta's problem?
BalasHapus*Rudly Syafridwan*
Do you guys think that the government is doing something to overcome these problems?
BalasHapus- Putra Arief-
Do you guys prefer living in Bandung than Jakarta now?
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